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Trimester Two Writing Progress Reflection

Published on 14th September 2016 I learned that Dominican Republic violates human rights because they are Haitian descent or different race.I think that the topic was very interesting learning about my heritage and country. learned that if your two details are not the same, then you would have to do detail explanation detail explanation. 1 way I improved in this trimester was adding more transitional words and connected my claim with my answer.Also adding relevant details.I think I should improve in my explanations a little better from the whole body paragraph.





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